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I don’t you think you understand
Just what you mean to me.
There’s something to be said about a man,
Who can make a girl feel free.
Free from this world.
Free from expectations.
Free from pretenses.
Running wild, being alive.
That is the precious gift your love brought me.
But you still curse yourself
Thinking you aren’t what I need you to be.
I need you the way you are.
I need this just as is.
I need you to run away from me,
And give another girl your precious gift.
Just what you mean to me.
There’s something to be said about a man,
Who can make a girl feel free.
Free from this world.
Free from expectations.
Free from pretenses.
Running wild, being alive.
That is the precious gift your love brought me.
But you still curse yourself
Thinking you aren’t what I need you to be.
I need you the way you are.
I need this just as is.
I need you to run away from me,
And give another girl your precious gift.
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Yeah, I agree with 
in that the ending really threw me a twist. But its interesting.
I think I would want one more stanza before the last, sorta a transition. But maybe you were aiming for the shock. Either way, its very good ^^
in that the ending really threw me a twist. But its interesting.I think I would want one more stanza before the last, sorta a transition. But maybe you were aiming for the shock. Either way, its very good ^^